Hmm.
I kinda liked it until the main melody kicks in, as you really should try to stick to one tone-scale all the way. It sounds kind of unharmonic. You should also work on your mastering, as almost everything gets crunched by your bass. I kinda like your build up and set up. But you need, as said, work on your melodies and mastering.
Yes i think i know what you mean about the bass. Its the part where the drum and bass kicks come in with the sine bass. Ill see if i can tone that down a bit of do something with the beat... maybe filter it a little. As for the melody, i don't really know what to do with that, as its the way i wanted it in the end.
I appreciate your critism, i will learn by it and experience. Thanks.
Awesome for a first
The build up weren't worlds greatest, but damn! My first was like noise compared to this one!
Lol, thanks. =)
Okay
That's a real drummer, right? He kinda slows down and goes faster like a rollercoaster. I'd also work on the vocals, they're kinda low.
The rest is pretty funny, and I laughed. ^^
Yes, we are all "real" :)
the recording ain't that good, we know.. But unluckily we don't have the original tracks and we should came back to studio to record again.. But this is mainly a fun song!
Been producing music for as long as I can remember (this is almost true), I've never taken it 100% seriously, and at this point in time, I don't think I ever will. That's probably why I don't improve my skills in the field.
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Norway
Joined on 11/12/07
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